User talk:Aishali742/new sandbox

Aisha, Since you're adding to an entry, it's important to signal where your new material will go. Also, as I mentioned in my email the target amount to add is 300-500 words of new text. Please post the revised version by Nov. 29th and I'll reassess your draft then (please email when it's up so I know to look at it). thanks, ALMc