User talk:Aiyosa523/sandbox

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This article addresses the subject of statistical anxiety. The current state of the article makes it difficult to ascertain that much about the subject, but what is written so far introduces the subject as a math phobia.

The second two paragraphs of the first section provide some good information, but don't have any sourcing. At this point this page is still pretty much a stub. I think it would be beneficial to expand on the six dimensions of the STARS anxiety rating scale. The subsection "Effects of Statistics Anxiety" is a good direction to go in and I think that should be expanded on if the author can find appropriate sources. I think another direction that might be useful to go in is medical opinions on the subject, if they exist. Beyond this I think the page just needs to be expanded, at this point there is not much to review, but three solid subsections (mentioned above) could make for a quality article.

Leavitt210 (talk) 16:51, 7 April 2015 (UTC)

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The article is divided into three parts. For the first part, it might be a good idea to give more information such as how to fight anxiety caused by statistics as the reader would like to find a solution that might help him personally. It could also be helpful for the reader to know how many people are affected by statistics anxiety (so that he will feel that he/she is not the strange one and that being anxious when studying a topic is normal). If a reader wanted more scientific reader, it may be a good idea to explain what causes our mind to be anxious (at the end of the paragraph). For the second part of the article, it could be a good idea to give more numbers for each point, such as how many people are affected by the different fears or by giving values from 1-5 to them.

There are a few grammatical mistakes that can be easily addressed and corrected. Some sentence can also be worded in a different, easier way to understand Casadolcecasa (talk) 15:36, 10 April 2015 (UTC)Mahmoud IdrissCasadolcecasa (talk) 15:36, 10 April 2015 (UTC)