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Caylen's Peer Review
I think you're off to a great start! I like how you already have many sources and the neutral tone in which your article is written. I'm sure you're still working on adding more information to the history/modern parts and am interested in what you find. A suggestion I have is maybe adding subsection of "Scandals" or "Controversy" in the"In pop culture" section instead of "K-Pop". Also there I know that BigBang's GD and Brown Eyed Girls GAIN also had some "controversies" surrounding weed if you didn't already know. Good work! - Caylen R