User talk:Ajanemack

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Elinor Ochs
I removed your addition to Elinor Ochs as it is a wp:primary source Also, that is getting rather heavy on the awards. Please add some more narrative biographical information which would indicate why he is wp:notable, background including education, and upbringing. Please use a secondary source- See wp:reliable sources. Please use an wp:inline citation. Thank you Jim1138 (talk) 21:47, 3 February 2016 (UTC)


 * You apparently did not read the request at the top of my talk page about keeping talk on one page. I explained my reason here. Please do not use his c.v. for a source. Use another source such as a biography. Also, that is way too many awards given how little other information is on the article. Try to keep it balanced. Thank you Jim1138 (talk) 22:03, 3 February 2016 (UTC)