User talk:Ajpettis/sandbox

I think you had a really great addition here, especially because of the way you introduced the wildlife-friendly farming aspect. I looked back at the original entry on Wikipedia and I see that you chose a good section to add on, especially since the original entry did seem like it was quite lacking in its depth. After reading your addition, I do firmly believe that it will compliment the original very well. As we begin to move forward and wrap up the project, I just had a couple of points/suggestions that you may want to take into consideration:Amaini15 (talk) 22:34, 2 December 2020 (UTC)Amaini15 - In terms of what was written in the "Examples" section of the initial Wikipedia entry, it seemed to me that in the other sections around it, such as with "Land Sparing," the entry portion included some type of data to go along with it. I'm not as well versed on the matter as you, so perhaps numbers/data from a span of years wouldn't necessarily fit in here, but I just thought it might be something to consider! - Not sure if maybe I'm missing something or not, but it seems to me like source 2 and 4 are the same one? - I was able to click on all you sources perfectly fine! I would just make sure before you let it go live that you have some sort of heading before all your sources, such as one that says "Bibliography" or "References." - As for your sources, I see some red notifications that say things such as "Missing or empty" and "Check date values in." I believe Professor Tysick said that this might happen because it can't read some of the punctuation somewhere in the sourcing, so if I'm not mistaken you may have to go in and manually fix that. Aside, nice job! Amaini15 (talk) 22:32, 2 December 2020 (UTC)Amaini15