User talk:Ak1849/Senaya language/Samaraghali Peer Review

Hi, I peer-reviewed your article and would like to make some more comments on your article. Firstly, your Lead is very strong and relevant, and easy to read. The last sentence of your Lead could benefit from more neutral language; I would suggest removing the words "special" and "significant" in order to sound more encyclopedic. In addition, you include rich information throughout the article, but there are many unsubstantiated claims that require in-text citations, so be sure to add those references where they are needed. Your sources themselves are relevant, and many of them are recent, but the APA formatting could use improvement. The order of authors should be alphabetical in your bibliography, and double-check to make sure that the last name of the author comes before their first name when formatting each individual reference. Other than this, the "Research" section should either be omitted or absorbed into a different section about phonology.