User talk:AkanshaC

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Grace's Peer Review
I think this is a great start! You have a strong lead, and the different sections help organize the article well. You could possibly add a section about her early life/medical schooling. The last sentence in the lead might fit better in the Achievements section of the article. Some of the sentence structure is a little choppy, but that should be an easy fix! The Sakal Group of Newspapers section could use some additional information, perhaps you could use the sources from the page that is hyperlinked there? Your listed sources seem to be good, reliable sources. Great job so far! — Preceding unsigned comment added by Gracescorsone (talk • contribs) 14:19, 23 April 2019 (UTC)

Gracescorsone (talk) 14:36, 23 April 2019 (UTC)