User talk:Akariok/Police brutality

Race & Class
I see that the current article frames police brutality in Brazil as a class issue, and you are framing it more as a race issue. Your first sentence "Police Brutality in Brazil is essentialy connected to race more than class" strikes me as a thesis, which is an argument or conclusion drawn from the evidence. For Wikipedia, it is best to omit your conclusions and simply provide the facts that can allow a reader to arrive at their own conclusion. I think that the data you provide from Forum Brasileiro de Segurança Pública are sufficient to allow any reader to see the racial character of police brutality in Brazil. Ihiyotl (talk) 20:19, 4 November 2021 (UTC)

Unclear
I am not sure what the phrase "black grinder machine in function" refers to. Is this a quote from one of your sources? Ihiyotl (talk) 20:19, 4 November 2021 (UTC)

Português
Have you considered linking to and/or adding to the pt.wikipedia.org site? There is a page on violência policial no Brasil. I imagine that it would be useful for the two pages to be in conversation with each other. Ihiyotl (talk) 20:21, 4 November 2021 (UTC)

Any thoughts on this ? Ihiyotl (talk) 21:24, 4 November 2021 (UTC)