User talk:Akb0036/Social and economic stratification in Appalachia

Starting off with your balance of the information written. It seems like you did a good job of this and it seems like the information is more than relevant with what the article is trying to get through to the readers. The information flows very well when reading and grammar looks good although if you were trying to spell conservative in sentence six of the second paragraph needs to be fixed. The information is also very neutral as it doesn't try to pull you to one side. Maybe just clarify where you wan this writing to go in the article. Next thing is the articles and I see you used a peer reviewed journal, a professor, and a newspaper. All very good sources newspaper sometimes aren't the first choice in a article but sometimes it's our only option. All around I think you have a great start to your article and keep up the good work. --Lrr00006 (talk) 17:49, 11 March 2021 (UTC)