User talk:Akb0036/Social and economic stratification in Appalachia/Melisa Nur Temiz Peer Review

For this article you have it would be good the break down the categories like origins, television and movies. It makes your article more understandable. But its good how you include the footnotes and include the resources that you use. And when you are writing your article it is nice for you to write it in neutral form. I think to improve you can look at your grammar and check that it is correct. It is good that you have some information which can give more satisfaction for readers and improve their knowledge about the stereotypes. I would like to see more information but what you have right now is good. I would like to see more information in the future.Melisa Nur Temiz (talk) 23:40, 9 March 2021 (UTC)