User talk:Akbugday/Climate change in iraq/HisanCahool Peer Review

This article is very strong and you seem to have done some very good work on it. I was impressed by the background information and organization of your article. Every topic moves nicely into the next, taking the reader through a story while also laying information out in an easy to find way, like Wikipedia should be in my opinion.

The biggest thing for you to work on for me is your bibliography, there are places which are missing sources, as I am sure you're aware of and working on. Other than sources, I think this article could benefit from an expansion of the human impacts section. You could add to the internally displaced people section by adding an explanation of displaced fishermen. The algezera video we watched for class about people who live in wetlands and were displaced to farming could be very beneficial. You could also add a section relating to this in the water section, talking about the effects this draining and refilling had in the long term health of the entire water system.

Furthermore, the addition of a biodiversity section could benefit this article. Possibly after the water section there could be a section about what lives there, what is going extinct, what is causing these extinctions. I'm excited to read this article after this semester of work is done, it seems like its going to be really cool and a great addition to the wikipedia database.HisanCahool (talk) 13:13, 26 November 2023 (UTC)