User talk:Akf77

Your submission at Articles for creation
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Your submission at AfC Jon Bunch (September 14)
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Your submission at AfC Jon Bunch was accepted
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I've had another look at this draft article and accepted it. He was a lead member of two notable bands. However, the articcle is in a poor state - it needs reliable sources about Jon Bunch, rather than about the bands he was a member of.

Mind you, the article about Sense Field could do with some work. I've added a couple of news reviews, so at least there's some proof it was noticed! Sionk (talk) 01:34, 7 March 2014 (UTC)

Thank you so much for taking another look and for your feedback. Your specific comments are quite helpful. I will continue working on this. Akf77 (talk) 07:36, 17 March 2014 (UTC)