User talk:Akhsar12546

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Peer Review of Sora Language
Hi,

I really enjoyed the article you have written thus far-- the style seemed very close to Wikipedia's overall style, and it expands greatly on the pre-existing Sora Language page. I think the large lead you had written works better broken into multiple sections, as some of the information was too specific for a lead. I created a few possible sections and moved the relevant portions there; if you agree with this, then you may want to add just a quick sentence-long summary of each section in a second lead paragraph. The new sections I suggested might need to be reformatted or fleshed out slightly, but the pre-existing text made a great basis. Additionally, don't be afraid to link to other Wikipedia articles! I added a few of the obvious article links, but I couldn't find any articles for some other parts, like the "semantic relator nouns." If these articles exist under different names, be sure to link them so readers can better understand the Sora Language. The references you have look fine, but be sure to put sources in the article text when you get the chance-- I added a few "citation needed" tags where I thought citations might be appropriate.Mrutala (talk) 06:14, 6 April 2017 (UTC)