User talk:Akmohsenin

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Hello, Akmohsenin, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Ian and I work with Wiki Education; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.

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Gothic fashion
Unfortunately I removed your latest entry to the article. In essence it was the addition of two large quotes, which should generally be avoided. Encyclopedic writing should have information supported by citations, not having the information quoted from the source. Also it is unnecessary to have a subheader where there is only a single section under the primary header. Please try redeveloping what you feel should be added. There is also no need to duplicate any citation info the reflist, the template handles it.-- ☾Loriendrew☽   ☏(ring-ring)  23:26, 10 December 2021 (UTC)