User talk:Akrasia25/K U ratio

I've made a few small grammar and style edits that I hope don't create errors. I'm a biologist with no planetary science background, so I'm reading this with very little prior knowledge on the topic. That said, I think that makes me your target audience, so here are some comments on things that confused me:

"Condensation temperature" as a header in the first table: The text of the table only mentions boiling points. Is this the same thing as a condensation temperature? If it is, I recommend using "boiling point" in the table for clarity, and if not then a quick mention of condensation temperatures should be in the text above.✅

I think the "Importance to Life on Earth" section is underdeveloped, but I don't know enough about the topic to add to it myself unfortunately. I'm especially confused by the word "appearance" because it implies that the volatile elements in question weren't there when the Earth formed.✅

"This difference suggests that the material that formed the Moon was subjected to temperatures considerably higher than the Earth." When? Before the formation of the Moon, during the event, or both?✅

"On the basis of available data, which is sparse for Mars and very uncertain for Venus, the three inner planets then become progressively more depleted in K passing from Mars to Earth to Venus.[8]" This doesn't seem like it should be in the "Meteorites" section.✅

Vanessa Quinlivan (talk) 20:51, 2 June 2019 (UTC)Vanessa Quinlivan