User talk:Aksajikian/Fistulectomy

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Andre Ksajikian's work!

Evaluate the drafted changes
Consider the following structure, drawing from your notes:


 * 1) First, what does the article do well? Is there anything from your review that impressed you? Any turn of phrase that described the subject in a clear way?
 * 2) * The article does a nice job of organizing the clinical details of a fistulectomy in a lead summary.
 * 3) What changes would you suggest the author apply to the article? Why would those changes be an improvement?
 * 4) * I would suggest inserting an image or two for the reader to be visually drawn to read the article. I would also encourage more details about how to prevent fistulas from occurring.
 * 5) What's the most important thing the author could do to improve the article?
 * 6) * Sub-headings and pictures!
 * 7) Did you notice anything about the article you reviewed that could be applicable to your own article? Let them know!
 * 8) * I liked the overall flow of the article. I'll take this into account when editing my own article.

Dingsanity (talk) 01:26, 8 January 2024 (UTC)