User talk:Aksalim75

Your submission at Articles for creation: Comfortable Exile (May 10)
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Dan arndt (talk) 13:30, 10 May 2018 (UTC)

Comfortable exile
Hi! I noticed that a month ago, you contributed some info about Binesh Balan's concept of comfortable exile to Wikipedia. Thanks for that! To make sure Wikipedia makes the most of your contribution, I'd like to ask you a few things: If you reply to me, please do me a favour and ping me by writing  somewhere in your reply and   at the end of your reply. Professor Proof (talk) 14:48, 22 June 2018 (UTC)
 * Just to make sure, are you 139.184.223.196? That's the person I'm trying to contact, sorry if it isn't you.
 * What's the importance of comfortable exile to the article Exile? It's obviously relevant, but the article mentions no other concept which was conceived and discussed by only one person. What makes it as helpful to readers of the article as the other concepts and subjects mentioned there?
 * Is there any reason you used title case rather than sentence case in the titles of your section and your draft? In Wikipedia, sentence case should be used in titles, and Balan doesn't use "comfortable exile" as a proper name (except in the abstract and the list of keywords for whatever reason).