User talk:Aksharakd92/sandbox

Assignment 2
You should include a section on ecology. A great deal is know about where this fungus lives and what it does. You may also encounter some discussion of its interactions with other soil microbes that could be discussed. Compendium of soil fungi (Domsch et al) is a start for this. Also the Barron book on soil fungi. There might be some interesting ecological stuff in primary literature that you could tap. There is also a great deal of knowledge on the physiology of this fungus. I think you should include the highlights of this. From a format standpoint, make sure that your citation numbers immediately follow punctuation (i.e. no space), and there you have units of measurement, the units should be separated from the number by a non-breaking space, e.g., 50 °C. Lastly, you should read Manual of Style/Medicine-related articles and make sure your approach to the discussion of disease is appropriate. Medmyco (talk) 16:43, 29 October 2013 (UTC)

Peer review
Hey there. I found your article to be pretty interesting, so I thought I should give you some feedback, to make it more good. Since your fungi is a soil fungi, I think it can occupy a lot of different ecologies, as my fungi is also a soil fungi and I found it to have quite a few different ecological niches. You could just give it a search, I might be wrong, but it's just a suggestion. I also think you should include a section on the history or physiology of the fungi, as it gives a great deal of information about your fungi to the readers.Your current paragraphs look great, but you should probably include more sections and expand on them, of course as much as you can, depending on how much research is done on your fungi.Ria99 (talk) 00:03, 1 November 2013 (UTC)

Peer Review
I would agree that you should talk about the soil ecology, where is it found in nature, how do people contract it? Does it only occur in certain parts of the world? Also, make sure all the other wiki articles you link to actually exist, as many of them did not. I would also like to see more about the clinical manifestations of the mucormycoses in humans, e.g. specific symptoms of infection, clinical presentation, etc. Also try and find some data on how successful the treatment usually is and what the survival rate is (a meta-analysis or review could be useful if you have one). Finally, do another readthrough to catch all the grammar mistakes (e.g. last sentence of the first paragraph in the identification section does not make sense). Otherwise, good job! Paola0329 (talk) 00:43, 1 November 2013 (UTC)