User talk:Al8969a

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Hello, Al8969a, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Adam and I work with the Wiki Education Foundation; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.

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 * Thanks Adam!Al8969a (talk) 06:16, 18 January 2017 (UTC)

~Peer Review ~

Hi, I think your article on Erina Matsui has a lot of potential. You have done a good job of providing notable work by your artist and exhibitions that they are featured in. You categorized her work well, describing the type of artwork she does as well as the themes within them.

That being said, I would suggest you find out more about her early life and how she got her beginnings in art. This plays into improving the first/lead paragraph - a clear structure and strong lead are key. One piece of advice I have is to add a "see also" section - this will add validity and notability. Finally, I would also suggest that you find to find some more external links and references.

Overall, the framework for a B class article is clearly there, it just needs to be brought together a bit more.

Cheers,

Tophe2t (talk) 21:10, 21 March 2017 (UTC)
 * Thanks for your peer review, Christopher! I'll definitely add in a section about early life, that's a good idea.

Al8969a (talk) 21:16, 21 March 2017 (UTC)