User talk:Alail3/sandbox

Rachel's Peer Review: Good job linking to other articles Last sentence of intro paragraph I think should say “The four iron-proteins are…” The bullets in the intro paragraph seem out of place Hemoglobin paragraph needs citations Maybe explain some terms in the hemoglobin like what the heme prosthetic group is (or what prosthetic groups are in general) and what an apo form is Lactoferrin needs citations I love the different photos in your article!

Drew's Peer Review:

Really liked that you guys already hyperlinked to other articles!

I feel that Transferrin has a fragment sentence in 'it travels freely in extracellular space' and could probably be joined to another sentence although that's just grammar nitpicking. Might need to also have a source for the rest of the information under that section as well. Noted that Hemoglobin and Lactoferrin need more citations as well.

Photos are great. Like that some are even animated. Real great outline and structure for the article! — Preceding unsigned comment added by ATouchton94 (talk • contribs) 20:38, 16 November 2018 (UTC)