User talk:Alaina.parrish/new sandbox

Feedback from Sarah Southerington
Overall you content is good. I think the section about the subspecies could be moved to the subspecies section but is still fine where it is. Because you are adding to an existing article, there doesn't need to be a huge amount of information add rather you should be filling in gaps or bettering the existing sections. As a lead I think that the information is good.

You still have to add links to other wikipedia articles to words or phrases the have articles. Southesm (talk) 14:23, 26 October 2018 (UTC)