User talk:AlainaBallantyne/sandbox

Comments from ADSky
Greetings AlainaBallantyne, Looks like you are on the right tract, you have information to cover the basics of your fungus and provides enough information to get a general idea about the fungus. Some things you can improve on are:

Formatting:

-Make sure your sentences flow together, of course this is still a rough draft, but the paragraphs you do have seem some what awkward to read.

-The final line in history and taxnomy, "The original source of P.setifera led A. Schmidt to originally name the fungus as a species of Microascus but later declared it as Petriella for reasons currently unknown," should get a citation, as this seems like a fact you can not state otherwise

-Hyperlink when you use words such as condiophores, and graphium state, as it can allow people to go to another wiki page to get a better understand of what these are

Content:

-If possible, try to find an explanation as to why the fungus was found in horse dung when it is a wood fungus

-Try to explain what CMCase is, I was very confused to as what this is

I see that it was pretty difficult to find sources for this fungus; I tried to find some myself and found it difficult. The UAMH website (https://www.uamh.ca/index.html) when you make a search for this fungus shows cases where this fungus was found and the location as well. You can use this information to further expand your habitat and ecology section. If you haven't already, Gerstein and the Earth Science Centre has a lot of books on Mycology and you may be able to find more information there.

Closing, keep up the good work!