User talk:AlanaSmith2115/draftarticle

Hi AlanaSmith2115, Great to see the page up. Some suggestions/omissions: The Aust. Council for Ed. Res has a wikipage so you could link to it when you first mention the organisation in your Lead Section. Avoid words such as 'vast'see my edit in last sentence of Lead Section. Introduction ... (this heading is not necessary. Your sub headings do the job. The OECD Program for Int. Assessment has a wikipage so you can link it here. The subheading 'Since the Lantite Test's introduction unnecessary. This is a good final paragraph to the existing section Cost: HECS debt: international audiences won't know this. So suggest writing in full with abbrev. in brackets and linking to either the wikipage (if there is one) or the website for HECS. Did some slight text editing while I was at it!. JaneHaggis 00:08, 21 October 2019 (UTC)