User talk:Alanaesimons/sandbox

Peer Review
A lead section that is easy to understand

Your lead paragraph provided a concise and informative overview of the subject. From someone with no knowledge of Frederick Seymour, the only possible point of clarification I could identify is maybe elaborating on which colonies he governed when you said "various". Also, maybe link to the Chilcotin Uprising Wiki page in this paragraph rather than the next one.

A clear structure

The chronology of your sections makes sense. My only suggestion would be to move the Early Life paragraph to earlier in the article, maybe after your lead paragraph.

Balanced coverage & neutral content

I think that your consideration of how Seymour developed relationships with the local Indigenous populations will be crucial to your article being well-rounded. It appears from your draft that you have a solid grasp on using neutral/encyclopedic language.

Reliable sources

Your sources are peer-reviewed and academic.

Overall, a very good start! MTralla (talk) 18:10, 14 February 2018 (UTC)