User talk:Alanagreengrass88

Your submission at Articles for creation: Alana Pang (March 20)
 Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Modussiccandi was:

The comment the reviewer left was:

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.


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Modussiccandi (talk) 22:27, 20 March 2021 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Alana Pang (April 2)
 Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by MurielMary was:

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.


 * If you would like to continue working on the submission, go to Draft:Alana Pang and click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
 * If you now believe the draft cannot meet Wikipedia's standards or do not wish to progress it further, you may request deletion. Please go to Draft:Alana Pang, click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window, add "Db-g7" at the top of the draft text and click the blue "publish changes" button to save this edit.
 * If you do not make any further changes to your draft, in 6 months, it will be considered abandoned and may be deleted.
 * If you need any assistance, or have experienced any untoward behavior associated with this submission, you can ask for help at the [//en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Wikipedia:WikiProject_Articles_for_creation/Help_desk&action=edit&section=new&nosummary=1&preload=Template:AfC_decline/HD_preload&preloadparams%5B%5D=Draft:Alana_Pang Articles for creation help desk], on the [//en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=User_talk:MurielMary&action=edit&section=new&nosummary=1&preload=Template:AfC_decline/HD_preload&preloadparams%5B%5D=Draft:Alana_Pang reviewer's talk page] or use Wikipedia's real-time chat help from experienced editors.

MurielMary (talk) 04:36, 2 April 2021 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation
 Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.


 * If you would like to continue working on the submission, go to the submission and click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
 * If you now believe the draft cannot meet Wikipedia's standards or do not wish to progress it further, you may request deletion. Please go to the submission, click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window, add "Db-g7" at the top of the draft text and click the blue "publish changes" button to save this edit.
 * If you do not make any further changes to your draft, in 6 months, it will be considered abandoned and may be deleted.
 * If you need any assistance, or have experienced any untoward behavior associated with this submission, you can ask for help at the [//en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Wikipedia:WikiProject_Articles_for_creation/Help_desk&action=edit&section=new&nosummary=1&preload=Template:AfC_decline/HD_preload&preloadparams%5B%5D=User_talk:Alanagreengrass88 Articles for creation help desk], on the [//en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=User_talk:Alanagreengrass88&action=edit&section=new&nosummary=1&preload=Template:AfC_decline/HD_preload&preloadparams%5B%5D=User_talk:Alanagreengrass88 reviewer's talk page] or use Wikipedia's real-time chat help from experienced editors.

Alanagreengrass88 (talk) 20:25, 2 April 2021 (UTC) Hello I would like to address your comments. Thankyou for your help on my draft. I am still trying to make it as goods I can and I appreciate all the help I can get. I don't have a conflict of interest. I am from Belfast Ireland and my name Is Alana Greengrass. It is a common name here in Ireland, but its just a funny coincidence. Thankyou Alana

Draft for Alana Pang
Hi, thanks for that reply! To improve the draft, please notice the advice from the other reviewer (the one on 20 March). The reviewer has noticed that some of the statements in the article are not backed up by the source which is cited. Anything written in a WP article needs to appear in another source. You might need to remove some details from the draft so that it complies. If you're not sure about how to edit the article in this way, you can ask a question at The Teahouse and editors will reply to you. MurielMary (talk) 10:27, 3 April 2021 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Alana Pang (May 26)
 Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by -Zai- was:

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.


 * If you would like to continue working on the submission, go to Draft:Alana Pang and click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
 * If you now believe the draft cannot meet Wikipedia's standards or do not wish to progress it further, you may request deletion. Please go to Draft:Alana Pang, click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window, add "Db-g7" at the top of the draft text and click the blue "publish changes" button to save this edit.
 * If you do not make any further changes to your draft, in 6 months, it will be considered abandoned and may be deleted.
 * If you need any assistance, or have experienced any untoward behavior associated with this submission, you can ask for help at the [//en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Wikipedia:WikiProject_Articles_for_creation/Help_desk&action=edit&section=new&nosummary=1&preload=Template:AfC_decline/HD_preload&preloadparams%5B%5D=Draft:Alana_Pang Articles for creation help desk], on the [//en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=User_talk:-Zai-&action=edit&section=new&nosummary=1&preload=Template:AfC_decline/HD_preload&preloadparams%5B%5D=Draft:Alana_Pang reviewer's talk page] or use Wikipedia's real-time chat help from experienced editors.

 Zai  (💬 • 📝 • ⚡️) (please ping on reply) 18:34, 26 May 2021 (UTC)

Concern regarding Draft:Alana Pang
Hello, Alanagreengrass88. This is a bot-delivered message letting you know that Draft:Alana Pang, a page you created, has not been edited in at least 5 months. Drafts that have not been edited for six months may be deleted, so if you wish to retain the page, please edit it again&#32;or request that it be moved to your userspace.

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Thank you for your submission to Wikipedia. FireflyBot (talk) 19:02, 26 October 2021 (UTC)

Your draft article, Draft:Alana Pang


Hello, Alanagreengrass88. It has been over six months since you last edited the Articles for Creation submission or Draft page you started, "Alana Pang".

In accordance with our policy that Wikipedia is not for the indefinite hosting of material deemed unsuitable for the encyclopedia mainspace, the draft has been deleted. If you plan on working on it further and you wish to retrieve it, you can request its undeletion. An administrator will, in most cases, restore the submission so you can continue to work on it.

Thanks for your submission to Wikipedia, and happy editing. Liz Read! Talk! 21:14, 26 November 2021 (UTC)