User talk:Alannanaseer/Women on Web

(No peer/fellow student has reviewed my article, to receive credit I have undergone the peer-review process on my own article.)

The structure of the article are well organized and is presented in a coherent and reasonable order. The lead of the article is concise and clear. The lead blatantly makes apparent what the article is discussing.

The article would stand to be improved by including an 'Operations' section, which would state more information on the headquarters of the organization and if the organization has other places of operation.

The perspectives present in the article are presented equally, one perspective on abortions is not explicitly favored. The article overall is not persuasive and does not try to sway its reader toward a certain perspective.

The article is supported by a variety of peer-reviewed sources but would benefit from more peer-reviewed sources being present in the 'Censorship' section.

Alannanaseer (talk) 02:54, 6 March 2022 (UTC)

Add page link to "miscarriage" on mainspace. Alannanaseer (talk) 05:17, 12 March 2022 (UTC)