User talk:Alaskah

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Manadude2 : Talk  10:39, 8 June 2009 (UTC)

Helpme
I've placed my new article under User:Alaskah/KIDO'Z as I've understood that this is the place for editing assistance before it goes live and can possibly be deleted. Can I please request for someone to review this article called KIDO'Z to make sure that it is within the Wikipedia standards.

Many thanks

Alaskah (talk) 06:42, 22 June 2009 (UTC)


 * Hi Alaskah, I've adjusted your comment to include a link to the subpage. Hope that's ok. PhilKnight (talk) 16:35, 22 June 2009 (UTC)
 * Hey, just a question. Has this article beed deleted in the past or is this the first version?-- Gordonrox24 ''' &#124; Talk 16:49, 22 June 2009 (UTC)
 * KIDO'Z was deleted because of concerns about being advertising. PhilKnight (talk) 16:52, 22 June 2009 (UTC)
 * I'm curious as to how User:Alaskah/KIDO'Z compares to the deleted version? I wouldn't call the current version "pure advert". Jozal (talk) 16:59, 22 June 2009 (UTC)
 * Same here. It looks decent right now and I think some more references could be found if need be.-- Gordonrox24 ''' &#124; Talk 17:05, 22 June 2009 (UTC)
 * I've restored the history, so you can compare the previously deleted version to the current version. PhilKnight (talk) 23:37, 22 June 2009 (UTC)

(←)I just had a quick read through of the article. It looks very good with the references (shows it is indeed notable), but the prose needs a little work. Perhaps a little more organization with regards to what ideas are in each section. A little organization and I'm sure it'll be fine to move to the main (article) space. Killiondude (talk) 02:48, 23 June 2009 (UTC)

Thanks to everyone for your valuable assistance. Killiondude, please can you elaborate a little on how you feel I should organize the prose a little? I've added in a Heading called 'Features' - will this suffice? Also, I've read through the Move article but cannot locate the move tab to move this into the main article space? Many thanks Alaskah (talk)
 * Hello again, the "move" tab is located at the top of article above the title, next to the "histroy" tab. Hope that helps. Jozal (talk) 13:04, 23 June 2009 (UTC)
 * I'm guessing that your account isn't autoconfirmed, because you have nine edits, and the requirement is ten. After your next edit, the move tab should appear. PhilKnight (talk) 13:15, 23 June 2009 (UTC)

I'm the one who deleted the original article. The article looks good. The only comment I have is that as someone who does lots of disambiguation, I'd love to see all of the language links be disammed before it goes to article space so I don't have to do it. :) I.e. English instead of English, etc. --User:Woohookitty Diamming fool! 13:13, 23 June 2009 (UTC)
 * I've taken care of Woohookitty's suggestions, thanks for your input. Jozal (talk) 13:21, 23 June 2009 (UTC)


 * I would glady move it into the mainspace for you if you wish.-- Gordonrox24 ''' &#124; Talk 17:08, 23 June 2009 (UTC)

Thanks Gordonrox24 - I would really appreciate it if you could move it into the main space for me. Thanks everyone for all your help. Alaskah (talk) 05:37, 24 June 2009 (UTC)
 * Done!-- Gordonrox24 ''' &#124; Talk 06:39, 24 June 2009 (UTC)

Thanks Gordonrox24! Much appreciated Alaskah (talk) 08:03, 24 June 2009 (UTC)