User talk:AlaskanMan907

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Please read WP:NOR
The key point here is "Articles may not contain any new analysis or synthesis of published material that serves to reach or imply a conclusion not clearly stated by the sources themselves." Thus if you want to make comparisons of populations, you need sources or a source that directly makes that comparison. I've deleted some of your text for that reason.

One mistake you've made that I used to is pick out quotes I want to use for author's books. We shouldn't do that, we need secondary sources discussing them. Doug Weller talk 09:49, 13 May 2020 (UTC)

You might ask there how to improve the article and how to fix the reference problem. Also see Help:Referencing for beginners}}. And read [[MOS:BLP and WP:BLP. Doug Weller  talk 12:43, 13 May 2020 (UTC)