User talk:Albertgrueger

Welcome to Wikipedia!
Hey Albert! Welcome to Wikipedia! I hope you enjoy your time as a Wikipedian! I just read and edited Martin Gropius Krankenhaus. It's, in my opinion, a wonderful first article. However, I recommend you read about peacock words, and about neutrality. In short, these articles say you need to show why Martin Gropius Krankenhaus is special. You did a good job of this, but you also some amount telling the reader that it's special, which I removed.

Don't worry, though! It's a very common mistake! :-) --I dream of horses (talk) 00:14, 28 June 2009 (UTC)

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I dream of horses (talk) 13:58, 28 June 2009 (UTC)