User talk:Albiecoop

Welcome!
Hello, Albiecoop, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Adam and I work with the Wiki Education Foundation; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.

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You have an overdue training assignment.
Please complete the assigned training modules. --ProfDRS (talk) 19:49, 29 November 2016 (UTC)

Peer Review
Hello!

So, I tried to make edits on your Wikipedia sandbox but for some reason I kept getting denied for editing. So, I'll just post my comments on here.

Formatting: -Just a couple things here, you want to put the headings and title in the proper Wikipedia format -Space out the sections a bit more (just add in a space between sections)

Content: -Try not to repeat information. For example, in your beginning paragraph and your Early Life And Work, you put her birth place and full name twice. You only need to put it in once. My suggestions would be to use the beginning paragraph as a broad introduction and then use the Early Life and Work section to talk about her birthplace, etc. -This is just a small nitpicking thing but try not to use her full name consistently. It seems on Wikipedia that authors typically refer to the subject once by their full name and then their last name for the rest of the article -Just a few typos here and there -The last paragraph when you talk about what she is best known for can probably go in the first paragraph, mainly because that's how Wikipedia would like users to do it

Overall, a very interesting article. With just a few minor touchups and some re-formatting, this is shaping up to be a great Wikipedia contribution! — Preceding unsigned comment added by Conorjokelly (talk • contribs) 15:55, 6 December 2016 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Madame E. Toussant Welcome has been accepted
 Madame E. Toussant Welcome, which you submitted to Articles for creation, has been created. The article has been assessed as Start-Class, which is recorded on the article's talk page. You may like to take a look at the grading scheme to see how you can improve the article. You are more than welcome to continue making quality contributions to Wikipedia. . Thank you for helping improve Wikipedia! Smmurphy(Talk) 16:09, 15 December 2016 (UTC)
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Article feedback
Thank you for your work on the article Madame E. Toussant Welcome. There appears to be an unfinished sentence at the end of the lead section of the article. Also, consider adding some images to the article. You can use images from Wikimedia Commons or find images to upload yourself following the steps at the Finding images tutorial. See our module Contributing Images and Media Files for more information on how to properly find and use images on Wikipedia. Please let me know if you have any questions. Rob (Wiki Ed) (talk) 23:54, 19 December 2016 (UTC)