User talk:Alc306/Discrimination against people with HIV/AIDS

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Overall Violence against persons living with HIV  Effects of COVID-19 pandemic on people with HIV/AIDS Lead --Liliput000 (talk) 23:37, 30 April 2022 (UTC)
 * Very solid and important contributions, Al and Maeve! Really glad you are adding these.
 * Be sure to view Sarah and Dakyung's peer reviews because they made some good comments for you
 * When you've done interspersed edits like yours in the section where you talk about COVID--- when you make your edits live, do them one at a time --- it's important to make the changes one at a time to keep the integrity of the edits clear.
 * As well, when you erase content, be sure to note in your edit description a little bit about why so that it doesn't ruffle feathers too badly!
 * Change the semicolon in your first sentence to a colon
 * In the third paragraph, change the semicolon to a period and initiate a new sentence with "Fear of violence prevents PLHIV from receiving..."
 * As one of your reviewers noted, you didn't copy the existing paragraph in "edit" mode so none of the citations came with. Be mindful of this when re-integrating content into the main article, when going "live", so as not to erase existing sources.
 * Here's a possible source for the first "citation needed" https://www.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/pmc/articles/PMC8137806/
 * Consider nodding to your adds (particularly re COVID?) in the lead somehow?