User talk:Aledbetter/sandbox

Katie's Peer Review for Lexi
Lead Section: I think your first sentence is great and the following paragraph gives a great summary of what the hotline is and who can use it. I saw that the current wiki page doesn't do a great job of introducing readers to the topic, but you've condensed it very well.

Article: I think your organization makes a lot of sense. It seems as though some of your sections are from the website (what to expect, how to help, etc.). I think you might have said something about that in class, but I think it makes senes to highlight important info in your wiki page. You may want to condense those sections into one large one entitled something like "Hotline Website." Even if you decide to keep it the way you have it in your sandbox, I think the info is important. For the Dating Bill of Rights section, I would add a sentence before all the bullets explaining what that is. Overall, your tone seems neutral and you have a great academic voice!

References: From what I see, you seem to have a good grasp on the citations. However, I noticed that there aren't any citations in the first paragraph. You may want to look over that and see if adding one or two would be appropriate. For the sections you still need citations for, contact our wiki person if you don't know how to do it. But you got this!