User talk:Alejandrosalva/sandbox

Hi Alejandrosalva,

Your article is good. I sense no biased content and your work is cited by each fact. (Thumbs up for those footnotes) Keep that up. I only see small errors such as not capitalizing certain words that do need capitalization. I suggest putting some stuff into smaller categories so other users who are accessing your article will know exactly what they're looking at. Otherwise, your work looks good so far; keep it up!

Alejandrosalva's Peer Review
The lead of this article definitely draws the reader in because of what a high statistic is given in terms of hunger in Bangladesh. The structure of the article could use a little work; each sentence does provide valuable knowledge and each contains a new statistic regarding hunger, but it is a bit overwhelming having many short sentences with so many different numbers. Maybe the author can combine certain sentences and blend thoughts together a bit more to create a more clear and easy to read structure to the article. There is lots of information on how many people are suffering from hunger in Bangladesh along with breakdowns of what exactly hunger means and in what ways the hungry are suffering, but there could be more written about the solutions Bangladesh or outside institutions are attempting to make and how this ties in with the high statistics regarding hunger. The article is neutral and provides lots of evidence and statistics which makes the reader feel that this is a reliable source of knowledge. Nikki048 (talk) 03:25, 18 October 2018 (UTC)

Manuel's Peer Review
The introduction and leading sentences are well structured and the topic is apparent within the first few sentences. The structure is clear, hence you stated the global issue, the country of focus, the status and situation of the country, and finally statistical measures/ studies conducted in the region. The article seems neutral till this point, but you should probably cite and introduce new implementations and practices that Bangladesh is using to combat severe hunger levels. Overall well cited paper and reliable sources. — Preceding unsigned comment added by MRivera17 (talk • contribs) 03:40, 18 October 2018 (UTC)