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Article Lacking Sources Link:
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/History_of_Bosnia_and_Herzegovina_(1945%E2%80%9392)

Sources for Article:
Sancaktar, Caner. "Historical Construction And Development Of Bosniak Nation." Alternatives: Turkish Journal Of International Relations 11.1 (2012): 1-17. Academic Search Complete. Web. 25 Oct. 2015.

Blitz, Brad K. "Bosnia Revisited: A Retrospective On The Legacy Of The Conflict." Forced Migration Review 50 (2015): 49-51. Academic Search Complete. Web. 25 Oct. 2015.

Bergholz, Max. "Sudden Nationhood: The Microdynamics Of Intercommunal Relations In Bosnia-Herzegovina After World War II." American Historical Review 118.3 (2013): 679-707. Academic Search Complete. Web. 25 Oct. 2015.

Armakolas, Ioannis. "The 'Paradox' Of Tuzla City: Explaining Non-Nationalist Local Politics During The Bosnian War." Europe-Asia Studies 63.2 (2011): 229-261. Academic Search Complete. Web. 25 Oct. 2015.


 * These sources look good, but they should be in the actual sandbox, not in the talk page. Josef Horáček (talk) 15:03, 26 October 2015 (UTC)

The Lead
Not a bad start. I suggest deleting sentence 4. The last two sentences should become sentence 2 and 3. Makes sense? Josef Horáček (talk) 19:11, 1 November 2015 (UTC)
 * Once you make those changes, you can post the lead. Josef Horáček (talk) 19:11, 1 November 2015 (UTC)