User talk:Aleksandravksn

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Hello,, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Shalor and I work with the Wiki Education Foundation; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.

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Removed content
Hi! I saw that your content was removed from democracy with this edit. The concern was that the content didn't belong in the lead section, as it was too specific for the lead portion of the criticism section. I'm also concerned that it seems to be an interpretation of specific authors' writings rather than a general overview of criticism for democracy, so it wouldn't really fit the section. My recommendation is to see if you can use the sourcing to back up or expand the existing criticisms in the section. Shalor (Wiki Ed) (talk) 18:30, 7 July 2017 (UTC)