User talk:Aleslie plu/sandbox

CaitlinMarie59 (talk) 03:12, 17 November 2018 (UTC)== Women and Religion Peer Review- Caitlin Chacon ==

The article is looking great. I like the fact that you decided to focus on mostly one part of the article, it keeps it from getting confusing and messy. The lead section that you pulled from the original article about Jainism is very good,"Jainism is an ancient Indian religion founded around the sixth century BCE.[42] Jainism is inclusive of women, as one of the cornerstones of the religion is the “fourfold sangha” which describes the Jainism community, which is made up of monks, nuns, laymen and laywomen", it easily explains the jist of what Jainism is and it explains where Jainism derives from. From there on you add information about the significance of women in society that is Jainism, "Women are important in Jainism, playing a major role in the structure, continuation and spread of the religion. Jain women have significant roles especially in the performance of rituals", and you added citations/sources that are reliable from what I can tell and easily go with your facts. I read some of the past edits on your article from other people and noticed that some bias has been taken out before, I see now that it comes across as extremely neutral with no biases from what I can see. The article itself is really organized and easy to follow, especially compared to what it looked like before you began editing.

- Caitlin Chacon (11/16/18 @ 7pm)