User talk:Alex.yuan011995/sandbox

Pre-move Review
Hello, I looked over your article history and noticed that you've done some good copy-editing, but not much else. You should know that we expected more improvements. Consider adding some citations and new text before Monday.

While reviewing, I noticed a number of missing elements and citations from the original article and added them back in. If you intended to remove them, feel free to.

I've written a series of suggestions that most of the class' articles have room to improve upon. They may not all apply to your article and don't worry if they aren't all done, but these features can really make your additions shine.

When ready, you can Begin moving your work to Wikipedia! A detailed explanation of the process can be found on our class wiki.

Please let me know if you have any questions. 一 Salt ♨️🚲🧂🧙‍♂️🐧🎓⚔️☠️ (talk) 07:39, 14 February 2020 (UTC)