User talk:Alex2596/sandbox

1. What does the article do well? The article gives a good understanding of two types of technologies used for wildlife tracking and research. 2. What changes specifically do you suggest overall? Split the two technologies you mentioned into two sections and talk about each more in depth. 3. What is the most important thing that the author could do to improve his/her contribution? Check for spelling and sentence structure. 4. Did you glean anything from your classmate's work that could be applicable to your own?

Timdy (talk) 22:46, 25 October 2021 (UTC)

1. What does the article do well? Has good explanation of the IoT tracking technologies. 2. What changes specifically do you suggest overall? Maybe have other types of technologies that apply to animal migration tracking. 3. What is the most important thing that the author could do to improve his/her contribution? More elaboration for the technologies. 4. Did you glean anything from your classmate's work that could be applicable to your own? Is specific to the reader to why the explanations are included. Galaxy67 (talk) 23:01, 25 October 2021 (UTC)