User talk:AlexBishU

Feedback on your work!
Hi, Alex! I told your professor I'd give a bit of feedback on each of your sandboxes, so please see my comments below: I hope this helps. I think it's a great addition and a very good start for a new article. Thanks, Alex! Please let me know on my talk page if you have any questions that come up! JMathewson (WMF) (talk) 21:28, 14 November 2013 (UTC)
 * Firstly, this is looking really great for a starter article and definitely can be ready to move into the article namespace. Great job!
 * Under your "Recommendations" heading, I recommend (see what I did there? :) ) removing the list of subsections, since you linked to the original source, where anyone interested can dig deeper. Instead, I recommend you stick to paragraph form and summarize some of the types of sections.
 * One issue that may arise is your use of the Truth and Justice Commission as the main source for the article. Since Wikipedia is a tertiary source, the articles typically summarize secondary sources instead of original sources (in other words: are there reputable sources you can find that discuss the report from the commission? That way, you're presenting others' conclusions rather than drawing your own). Does that make sense? Some editors believe making this information available via any source is better than none at all, and I tend to fall into that category. I just wanted you to know of some concerns that might come up once you move your article!

Agreed on almost all counts. I'd simply add that there are few if any secondary sources available, so the commission's report has to be the main source in addition to the very short coverage from Hayner book cited footnote 1. Dwebsterbu (talk) —Preceding undated comment added 16:22, 18 November 2013 (UTC)

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