User talk:AlexLamphear/sandbox

suggestions
Alex, it seems you are very on top of backchecking the sources on your page, and you have already caught a lot of plagiarism errors. Good work!McGinnisb (talk) 17:17, 15 October 2017 (UTC)

suggestions 2.0
Alex, the best wikipedia articles should have the five elements as stated in the training. 1) A lead section, 2) clear strucutre, 3) balanced coverage, 4) neutral content, 5) reliable sources. Based on your sources, you have reliable sources and neutral content. In your sandbox, your lead section could be improved upon to allow an easier understanding of the content below.PeterBryant04 (talk) 14:20, 17 October 2017 (UTC)

I'm on it! Thank you for the suggestions! AlexLamphear (talk) 11:08, 13 November 2017 (UTC)