User talk:Alexalathom/Merchandising/Flopez4 Peer Review

peer review follow-up
In terms of drafting, it looks like you're a bit behind where you should be on the project. I did read through your bibliography, and it appears you found several credible and relevant sources. Now it is about using those to actually make edits to the article. The sections you proposed editing seem to be relevant, but it is hard to offer feedback without any of the prose drafted. KGS8TH (talk) 15:18, 27 March 2023 (UTC)