User talk:Alexcentala/sandbox

Hey Alex! I really liked your article about juvenile hemochromatosis! My favorite part of it was definitely the organization. I found it very easy to follow along, and I liked how the symptoms are in bullet point format. I might steal this formatting for my article!

For the diagnosis section, I lime how you included the differential diagnosis. That is always something that I want to see when I look at a disease quickly on Wikipedia. I also like how you included the subsections here. There seem to be multiple routes you can take for the diagnosis of this disease, and your sections make this very easy to follow. In some subsections, especially imaging and biopsy, images may be useful but are definitely not necessary.

I also liked your treatment section. It was all laid out very logically and had great explanations for how each is used. Perhaps a table summary could be useful.

I do like the sources you used. They are all reputable. Also, I like how neutral the information presented is. Overall, the organization is great, the information is great, and really the only adjustment I would consider is adding some images/tables. Great job!!WMidnight (talk) 19:52, 10 April 2022 (UTC)


 * Thanks for the feedback, and feel free to use any of the formatting I employed for your own article :p
 * I definitely was thinking about images, but wasn't too sure what to do or where to look - I think I'll pursue that! And thanks for the table suggestion, I love organization and I'll try to add those in as well. Alexcentala (talk) 04:22, 11 April 2022 (UTC)