User talk:Alexhuseman/sandbox

Peer Review Alex, I think your article topic is very interesting and for the most part, well written. However, I think in some places you could tighten the language and citation. For instance, you write "that she felt she was not bound to England by any human link" but this seems like an assertion that cannot be verified unless directly cited from a source. Other instances of this crop up and can give the article an opinionated instead of objective style. Otherwise, I think the information presented is thoughtful and valid, and is simply in need of revision and consolidation.