User talk:Alexisbrady/sandbox

Alexis' peer review:

You're off to a great start! The only thing I would change would be the tone, as I think it has the tone of that of a paper. Other than that, good job so far on using reliable sources! Krysmoran (talk) 23:31, 18 October 2018 (UTC)

Alexis's Response:

Thank you, I really appreciated your feedback! I noticed that my WIKI post sounds like an essay, so I'll make sure to change the tone. Thank you 23:30, 18 October 2018 (UTC)Alexisbrady (talk)