User talk:Alexmkid3/Ronald J. Clarke

Hello! I read the article and I found the added information very straight to the point and informative. One thing that did catch my eye is this particular sentence "He chiseled away at the breccia inside the Silberberg Grotto and found a hominid humerus. These bones allowed him to conclude that the mandible had ape-like features..." I think I'm missing the connection between the humerus and the mandible. I'm pretty sure the humerus is an arm bone, so I'm not clear on how finding the humerus would allow him to conclude that the mandible had ape-like features. I think that particular sentence needs some clarification, but other than that I think it's a good article. Theturtleprincess (talk) 00:22, 15 May 2020 (UTC)

Thank you for the helpful feedback! I will be sure to change the content of this sentence to more make it more clear! Alexmkid3 (talk) 21:34, 22 May 2020 (UTC)

Hello, your article was concise and well organized! I left a bit more information in my peer review. Overall, great work! Agudi0325 (talk) 03:01, 16 May 2020 (UTC)

Thank you for the feedback you left me on my peer review! I will be sure to update my draft to enhance the quality! Alexmkid3 (talk) 21:34, 22 May 2020 (UTC)