User talk:Alexstonehill/San Juan Island National Historical Park/Arboyle Peer Review

General info Whose work are you reviewing?

(provide username)

Link to draft you're reviewing https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Alexstonehill/San_Juan_Island_National_Historical_Park?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template Link to the current version of the article (if it exists) San Juan Island National Historical Park Evaluate the drafted changes

Lead

You added an additional space here: in the 1872 -- or somehow it was added in formatting. I didn't fIx it because I wasn't sure if you've posted this anywhere else yet.

Good addition with citation for the 2013 update

Setting and historical context

Maybe consider adding the link to the Treaty of Washington (1871) again -- I know it's in the lead and I honestly don't know if this is wiki best practices - but I forgot about it from above and went looking for it so maybe worth having twice.

English Camp -- Updated from British

The article you reference at the end of this section states British Camp -- it's unclear as to why you updated this to English

Recreation

Again you include English camp. According to History of Canada (1763-1867) Beginning with the 1763 Treaty of Paris, New France, of which the colony of Canada was a part, formally became a part of the British Empire.

Question: Are you a double spacer after a period? Are my eyes tricking me or did you go in and add two spaces at the end of every sentence? ie: Sentence spacing & Leading

This was an interesting read. I hope my edits are helpful! I included my edits on the feedback page + here. Not sure where is right so I am doing both.

Arboyle (talk) 05:22, 27 April 2021 (UTC)