User talk:Alextm21/sandbox

Good work leading up to the first draft. It looks like one of you (you!) is doing more workRJBazell (talk) —Preceding undated comment added 21:20, 6 November 2017 (UTC)

Peer Review
I am very excited to see the finished product of your article. I am very curious to know how you are going to phase your lead section. Is it going to be somewhere along the lines of the tobacco industry's strategy being repeated across multiple instances of history and policy making? I was confused in the "previous use of strategies" portion when you discussed Hill and Knownton. Isn't that the strategy that you are saying tobacco used and stayed prevalent through a variety of policy making as with climate change? Why would it then be in previous? Other than that I think you're doing really well with the article and making a really strong connection between topics ( tobacco and climate change) that many would see totally unrelated.

JD Johns (talk) 03:02, 15 November 2017 (UTC)