User talk:Alfie Gandon/sandbox

Structure
Hi. Good work here. There seems to be a decent variety of good quality references. I'd try to avoid using Liam Hogan's tweets as sources if possible, as they'll likely be challenged. I would suggest adding some headings and, if possible, rearranging some of the text so it's more ordered chronologically. At the moment, it jumps from 2003 to 2016 to 1993 to 2000 to 2013. I'd put the debunking of the myth into it's own section - 'Lack of evidence', or 'Debunking of claims', perhaps?

Hopefully I'll have time soon to give you hand! Bastun Ėġáḍβáś₮ŭŃ! 10:53, 8 February 2017 (UTC)
 * OK, I've tidied the chronology and introduced headings. I'm not sure what link you're referring to, though. Alfie Gandon (talk) 17:02, 13 February 2017 (UTC)