User talk:Alfuller18/Roberta Bondar/Jpatt19 Peer Review

The existing article has a great set up so far. It has a good balance between sections and the existing sections answer most questions that I could think of to ask about this individual. With that being said I would use their source and edit/add to what they have going forward. Your book reference looks to be relevant to your subject as she was the first female astronaut in Canada. I would however caution you to stay in a neutral tone when you use this source and not to make personal statements or conclusions. Best of luck going forward. (I also left this on you biography sandbox talk page) Jpatt19 (talk) 02:51, 2 March 2020 (UTC) James Patterson.