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Isabella/Allie Review
1. what does the article do well? Is there anything from your review that impressed you? Any turn of phrase that described the subject in a clear way?

- Allie has sources that show the authenticity of her facts. Also, she uses studies to give the reader insight. What impressed me was her choice of Wikipedia article to focus on. It is about the gendering of children's toys, which a very interesting subject.

2. What changes would you suggest the author apply to the article? Why would those changes be an improvement?

- Maybe clarifying what part of the wiki article that you want to contribute

3. What's the most important thing the author could do to improve the article?

- Using the cite tab to help her create full citations for her outside sources and adding more structure to her page.

4. Did you notice anything about the article you reviewed that could be applicable to your own article? Let them know!

- I noticed that her article also touches on how men have exaggerated masculinity for their joys, and that is the same as the view of our male ancestors.

— Preceding unsigned comment added by Dallas Rose (talk • contribs) 20:50, 21 February 2019 (UTC)